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PostSubject: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:08 pm

Name:Ord
Age:26
Planet of Birth
Family:The other Clones
Codename:CC-569
Race:Human
Grander:Male

History:
CC-569 Was created to be a hero, he was one of the clones that where chosen to turn the tide of the battles and serve the Chancellor unlike every other Commander.His first mission was on Geonosis The epic battle there left tragic memmorys for his head.After the Kaminoons came to the training grounds he knew that something bad will happen, then the battle alarm was sounded and every clone followed the protocol taking his helment and weapon.The Pilots too their possition and soon they all where going to the Dropships.Then it was clear the time has come, the time of the their darkness the time of the....Clone wars.He was prepared Commando Elite unit something truly special.He had to Defend the republic and his brothers but no one of them was prepared for the battle of the Geonosis.


After their landed on Geonosis no one of them was prepared for the battle they had the training but no one ever knew whats expecting them a Large army of Droids that where killing on sight.After few hours his ship came out from hyperpscae and he followed the instructions getting inside a dropship, there he was with a squad of 5 man and AT TE loaded with weapons. they landed on the meeting point he couldent belive what he was seeing...There where Clones all around him, massive brown metalic things was walking to them they knew who was their enemy and all opened fire at the droid army.They He too cover behind a rock and started to shoot down droids he saw how his brothers where dieing, medics where helping Damaged clones and the Drops ships wasn't ending ship after ship Squad after squad the battle was going.Many people died he was waiting for order keeping a line of 200 meters with 500 man squad he was setting off every droid on his eye.


It wasnt long before his comm started to ring, after answering it Orb got his first mission it was to take over a base on the top of the mountain it was hard job there where snipers all around and it was hard for him to get there.The Mission adviser sended to him 3 more Clones.The First clone died when they ran to climb the mountain, the others survived.They started to climb the mountain under heavy fire they had AT TE behind their backs but it didnt help much, after getting the mountain climbed they where welcomed by 20 Droids and 1 Droideka that was guarding the entrance the base was jamming their signals so they had to take her down they opened fire at the droids taking the down slowly and soon the had killed 7 droid when they took cover to reload.



After reloading their weapons they headed to the building Ord took of the head of the droid that was aming at his back by slaming it with his Rifle and then he ducked to avoid few blaster fires.The others where under heavy attack power and they needed reinforcements witch they didnt get because there was no free units.The team run inside and it was greated by droideka, Ord took few steps back and entered from the other door getting behind the deka he took out his main power cell making it lose control and turn off.Then he recived his new objective to go and find some kind of Gionossian witch was failure because one rookie shot down the prisoner.Soon the battle was going to over and they all where tiered from fighting ground and air forces was combining their power to defeat the mass droid army.After the battle of Geonosis The clones where Known as the Grand Army of the Republic led by the republic ordered by a Jedi Master.He knew that they are the only hope of the republic and althout never thought that someone of them can betray them.He Concidered every Clone as his brother and he was aways following the Commands given to him.

The Battle of the maluvilance:
After the battle of Geonosis they all where split by Squads like 501 602 56 84 and so on....They where sent under the Command of Generals and admirals.There was Jedi Generals and Jedi Commanders the commanders was usually a Padawans of the Generals.That had to learn something and by the time there was no time for traning all day so the Young Jedi was learning in action sometimes even they where failing the mission.The Call of the Rainbow was his most dangerious mission not because it had many droids it because of the landing he had, his ship was shot down by some CIS cruiser they broke into peaces he managed to stand up and take cover behind AT TE.After that He took a rifle from the ground, heading to command the other clones.They all thought that hes dead and the Rookies was starting to panic Then He appeared shooting down 2 Droidekas from behind taking cover behind a rock.The Rookie said "Look, The Commander is still ALIVE!"Org Turned around his head said "Do not let them pass in the city Fight with your lives"Org was using the pistol becasue he had to drop the rifle because his arm was broken.Few hours of defending the town was spent there the Droids was giving up till the arrival of General griveous himself.The Malavilance destroyed the Republic cruisers letting them without any Deffence from bombarting then the Big ship ran into hyperspace the Republic cruisers needed 1 hour to regain their power back this was too much for them.....The droids moved into attack and this time there sended all the force they had soon they managed to kill most of the clones sending bombart attacks.After one hour the clones where few almost like the droids the Droid General noted that this planet was lost and ordered bombarting right before the bombs drop the clone Cruisers took on their power opening fire at the main CIS ships the 4 CIS frenegats wend down the General took his fighter and left the planet the mission was success but and terrible failure aswell.



The battle on Mygeetoo:

It was long night on Kamino when they was summoned again to protect the republic Org was transfered to a Jedi Master Star cruiser with the Jedis help he had to take the planet and turn the tide of the war.Soon the clones was on the cruiser, taking the mission ifnomation and taking their last moments of peace till their success or death.Few hours after the call the 3 starcruisers came out of hyperspcae loaded with clones in the Drop ships, the clones knew that they may die in this Assault but they still had hope, the Commander didnt fight before side to side with a jedi before so he was feeling odd...He was thinking "What if the jedi cant control us....whats going to happen then, are we going to win...."When the doors opened he just smiled under his helment giving the orders of his squad and soon the battle had begone.The Clones didnt let down the Jedi the misssion was not as hard and the others but it wanst easy as the battles of the Simolators.They had to take over the planet satrting from the main capital city blasting every droid the civils was in panice the briges had holes and the cold weather gave them enought trobbles the droids didnt felt anything because they where machines but the clones felt alot of Cold weather even under their armors.There wasn't any problems till the tanks arrived in the center of the battle they where surrounded by 2 tanks that was giving them really hard times...The tanks took down many clones including 2 more commandos and in the end it looked like they are doomed.Till the Jedi arrived, Ord too down one of the tanks really easy making it explode with a grande from inside witch made him almost lose his life because of the explosion.The other clones managed to get him out of there sending him to the doctors on the Space station.The Jedi Took down the second tank really easy making a hole under the tank he made it explode, he jumped hight in the air taking no damages unlike Commander ord.The battle was won and they headed back to the cruisers awaiting for their new orders






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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:31 pm

Alright. I see no problem. Approved for Clone Commander.
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:40 pm

This bio has some timeline problems...
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:42 pm

The bio is part of the CLONE WARS era. HTe fact that clone skins are diffrent doesnt change the story.
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:53 pm

It's not about that.
Battle of Felucia=Near the end
''...Droids was giving up till the arrival of General griveous himself.The Malavilance destroyed the Republic cruisers...''=Malevolence was kinda destroyed you know...
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:57 pm

Felucia had many battles: First off in the 22 BBY the Republic made a medical post there. It was attacked. Laster on barris Ofee and Aayla Secura went to Felucia aswell. That was the 19th BBY where Order 66 began. There were many battles int he time between 22 BBY and 19th BBY.
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:04 pm

Near the half of 22 BBY, the CW just starts. And, I just checked, and I found nowhere the medical thing the Republic had on Felucia. Yes, Barris and Aayla were sent on Felucia, but that was almost at the end of the war. And I doubt this is the era part of your community.
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:06 pm

Wikipedia Quote: ''At some unknown point during the Clone Wars, a farming community was established on the planet which grew the nysillin that served as a medical herb. The reptilian Felucian farmers were later terrorized by Hondo Ohnaka's pirate gang who demanded that the settlement hand over their harvest. In order to protect themselves, the farmers hired a group of bounty hunters which consisted of Sugi, Embo, Seripas and Rumi Paramita. The Galactic Republic also established a medical station in orbit around the planet in order to treat clone troopers wounded in battle. However, the Confederacy of Independent Systems staged an assault that destroyed the space station and deployed a droid dispenser that held Vulture droids to destroy any intruders. '' Also ''Felucia later became the headquarters of the Commerce Guild, which supported the Confederacy of Independent Systems, and Felucia would become a valuable member world. In 22 BBY, the Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker, Ahsoka Tano, and Plo Koon were involved in a futile assault on the planet. Later in the war, the planet was named by Supreme Chancellor Palpatine as part of a "Triad of Evil," alongside Mygeeto and Saleucami.''
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:09 pm

OK, I believe you now. But still, what does the Malevolence thing doing there?
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:10 pm

Well, he just took it as an RP figure. It wasnt destoryed the first week. It could've went everywhere It was wanting to.
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:13 pm

You see, this is why I don't like CW, GCW or KotOR eras. Because, most of what you have to do is kinda canon only. You do one battle that happened in SW canon. You have to make the end the same as it happened in canon. And that's the thing with the Malevolence traveling where it wants with our imagination.
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PostSubject: Re: CC-569(Commander Ord)   Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:01 am

Kris, maybe you should resize your picturs Very Happy
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