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PostSubject: Vyln Garv the Deceiver   Vyln Garv the Deceiver Icon_minitimeMon Jun 28, 2010 8:33 am

Name: Vyln Garv
Age: 35
Planet of Birth
Family: No family is known of and he cares for little.
Codename: The Deceiver
Race: Human Male
Grander:Male
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Following class: Sorceror of the Ancient Sith magic
History:

When Vyln Garv was born he was like any ordinary child except he was very tall for his age. He played like other children, ate like other children, and looked like other children other than his extreme height. He was not like other children however and when he learned of the jedi on Coruscant he made it his quest to acquire a lightsaber. As a young boy he was drafted by the Jedi Council and became an initiate there.

Becoming a Jedi Padawan

As an Initiate he had always craved learning about the lightsaber. He knew that he would not learn about it until a later time so he spent most of his time studying ancient languages, including the ancient language of the sith. He seemed to have a skill for this trait and learned quickly absorbing each new language like a bowl of cereal. It seemed like a talent to the Jedi of the Order but it was the force. When he looked at an ancient language or any language for that matter the words, symbols, and drawings would become basic in his mind and he would understand.

As an initiate he would train in the was of saber fighting, learn new languages, and study the history of the Jedi. He learned alot about the Jedi but was always curious to why he wasn't aloud to learn about the sith. Finally, the day to become a padawan had arisen. Jedi Knight Tylva Estarn was looking for a padawan and she knew how to pick the best one. She lined up the 3 initiates she had chosen to pick from and told them to complete her task. Her task was simple, recite the jedi code in the most unique way as possible. The first student recited it in basic while cartwheeling, the second student did it on his head, but Vyln recited it in the tongue of the wookies.

The next task was to fight a duel with staves, a weapon a jedi initate had never seen before. Each person had one life. If they were hit by the staff they were disqualified. The first initiate, stayed in the back deciding to sneak up on vyln and his attacker when the time was right. Vyln easily deflected all of the clumsy attacks of his bigger opponenet and swatted his opponent on the hand causing him to drop his staff and be disqualified. Vyln grabbed the staff of his opponent, twirled it and threw it at the first initiate, catching her by surprise and hitting her square in the face. The Jedi Knight had found her outside of the box padawan, and let's hope he is not to much to handle.

Life as a Padawan

Vyln built his lightsaber on Llum with the guidance of his master. Tirelessly, he took three weeks to build the lightsaber staff he would call his weapon. Unknowingly to his master however, he had also taken a red lightsaber crystal from the cave, he thought that if he left the Jedi a green crystal would be innapropriate. When they returned to Coruscant his master told him to rest and tommorrow they would begin training anew. This is when Vyln decided to strike and he would gain what was his before he left.

In the Galactic Museum there were many sections. There were sections of ancient history, jedi history, but vyln was looking for dark side artifacts. Two guards stood at the door and a wide window as on the other side of the room. He walked up to the guards, showing his ticket, and moved into the room. First he found the mask. The mask was an ancient sith artifact. It's usage was not known tto the jedi but it intriqued him nevertheless. The mask would later help Vyln to call on the dark side when he was weakened and aid in the art of sith sorcery. The other object that interested him was a book. The book was covered in the Sith Language and read "Sith Sorcery". Using the force, Vyln ripped the mask from its restraints and broke the cubicle holding the book. Putting both objects into his brown robes he turned for the window and jumped straight through the glass. The guards only had time to gape.

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Life as an Outcast

For five years of his life he spent his time running and reading the book of Sith Sorcery. Jedi, republic authorities, and mercenaries always seemed to be able to track him and he spent most of his time looking over his shoulder, and moving from place to place. As he began to learn new techniques from the book he began to cover his tracks. To hide from the mercenaries and authorities he would erase the memories of guards, attendants, and other oeople he came in contact with. This did not stop the Jedi however and authorities directed by the Jedi always seemed to catch him. This was when Vyln discovered the pages about hiding one's aura. He discovered that the Jedi could track the aura of the dark side of both the book, his mask, and himself. The book began to teach him how to mask his aura and even to give it the appearance of a good, clean aura. After he mastered the technique, like in the case of Darth Zannah when she was younger, he could even fool Jedi Masters.

He began to take on the powers and abilities of the sith sorcerors. He even wore black robes, carried a red lightsaber, and wore his terrifying mask. To gain more knowledge on the force and even the sith he began to mask not only his aura but his presence. With the use of illusions he could change his appearance to look more friendly. He could change the appearance of others too but he was very clumsy with the design if not given several days to perfect it.

Finally, through use of the book and the mask he mastered the art of illusions. He created illusions that were usually in the form of terrifying creatures or horrifying scenes that killed the person from the inside: depressing and hurting them. Through the use of the mask he could project the illusions farther distances, and to a greater number of people. A powerful force user could resist the illusions but only after they realized they were not real and a powerful attack of light side energy could stop the illusions from affecting the people.

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Now

Currently, he is searching for a purpose with his sith knowledge. He has learned these arcane abilities and craves to put them to greater use. He is the master of torture and deception. He is The Deceiver. He is focusing on learning the arts of fear and is starting to play with the ability to use pure dark side energy. The second part is very unpredictable and he refuses to use it in battle for the risks to the body and those around him.

One of the things he learned from his studies of ancient sith sorcery and sith lore was to leave a legacy. He searches for an apprentice who is worthy of the awesome power that is the dark side. One day he will find this apprentice. But if the apprentice cannot survive the challenges and horrors of training under a Dark Jedi, he will personally destroy him and find a new apprentice: one more worthy of the title; Dark Jedi.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sith_sorcery for any questions on Sith Sorcery
((This Biography is Completed))


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PostSubject: Re: Vyln Garv the Deceiver   Vyln Garv the Deceiver Icon_minitimeTue Jun 29, 2010 7:17 pm

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sith_sorcery for any questions on Sith Sorcery
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PostSubject: Re: Vyln Garv the Deceiver   Vyln Garv the Deceiver Icon_minitimeWed Jun 30, 2010 5:39 am

I approve up to nori or another admin

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This was an opinion.... just to be clear


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PostSubject: Re: Vyln Garv the Deceiver   Vyln Garv the Deceiver Icon_minitimeWed Jun 30, 2010 9:25 am

Alright amy made a mistake in here, I would never approve this bio.....By the currents reasons down bellow.

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Pending.(You have 7 days to edit the bio otherwise it will be denied)

Reasons

1. The biography is too overpowered, there is no way to lean the force powers....Even palpatine doesn't have these powers....
2.There isn't really enought explanation why he turned to the dark side....and i think that its odd to turn because of the mask ect.....
3.How can he hide his Aura at such low level?Impossible.
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PostSubject: Re: Vyln Garv the Deceiver   Vyln Garv the Deceiver Icon_minitimeWed Jun 30, 2010 9:38 am

You're right.. He doesn't have enough reasons to fall to the dark side...

Sith sorcery is a stupid reason but I still don't believe it is that overpowering

Darth Zannah as a young apprentice in the beginning of her training fooled jedi masters with the aura hiding...
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