Clone Commander Aragon

Name:Aragon
Age:N/A
Planet of Birth:Kamino
Family:N/A
Codename:CC-98
Race: Human Clone.
Grander:Male
Outlook:
History: Early life

CC-98 began his life as one of countless cloned officers slated for a leadership position in the Grand Army of the Republic. Early on in his career, he showed a flair for independent thought that often drew the always-prying eyes of the Kaminoans.

The Clone Wars

As leader of the 7th Sky Corps, CC-98 was to be paired with a Jedi General. He was pleased to discover that he would be operating under the command of famed Jedi Knight Obi-Wan. However, he did not participate in the first Battle of Geonosis.He would later serve under Jedi Master Mace Windu at the Battle of Skor II.

Additional training

Several months into the Clone Wars, CC-98 was temporarily pulled from the fighting in order to be entered into an experimental training regiment, headed by ARC trooper Alpha-17, designed to provoke independent thought among the enrolled commanders. As a sign of his new-found independent streak, 98 took the name "Aragon," and began customizing his armor with equipment previously available only to the ARCs. Aragon's armor modifications included a small, bullet-shaped jetpack, a secondary comm antenna, a visor on his helmet, a pair of antennae on his helmet, enlarged shoulder pads, and a small stick-like tool in an armband on his upper right arm.

Of the hundred commanders put through Alpha-17's training program, a handful were picked by Alpha-17 and assigned to Squad Seven, an elite group of cross-trained commandos made up of the Grand Army's best snipers, demolition experts, and marines, whose role was to accompany ranking Jedi on any type of mission. For their stellar performances, Commanders Aragon and Odd Ball were given control over Squad Seven, although Major Jorir handled its day-to-day operations.

Battle on Geonosis

Separatist Poggle the Lesser set up new droid foundries on Geonosis. Aragon's gunship made it to Point Rain, the landing zone, where he helped a Jedi recover during the battle. He then defended the landing zone until generals Mundi and Skywalker arrived. He kept fighting until the shield generator came down. The group then prepared for the factory assault.

Aragon went with Master Thon and Master Cin Darling to find Poggle and capture him. They tracked him to the Progate Temple, where Luminara Unduli also had tracked him, but been captured by Geonosian zombies. These zombies had been controlled by Brain Worms that enabled the Queen Karina the Great to keep contact with them even after death. This also made it possible for the drones to continue their attack after being shot or cut by a lightsaber. When Aragon, Thon, and Cin Darling reached the Queen, Aragon, together with his men, spread out to ambush Karina the Great and her drones while Thon and Cin Darling tried to negotiate with the Queen. This, however, failed, and Aragon and his troopers killed her while Thon and Cin darling rescued Unduli and escaped the collapsing temple, along with Aragon.

Ok....lets see this bio is denied due the current reasons

Clones do not fail on anything thay aways follow stick orders
Commanders do not patrol around the city.
The bio size is just too small.

Here is an example of a approved commander bio

http://g-rp.freeforumshosting.org/approved-biographies-f7/cc-569commander-ord-t30.htm

Edited. The first story was made for the old Echo - 198. Than i did the commander when 198 died but frogot too change the story.I writed a bit more.Hope its fine...

Denied you cannot place yourself with cannon characters, the only place where you can be with a cannon char is on Gianosis