Vrihn Kardian (Work in progress)

Name: Vrihn Kardian
Age: 40
Planet of Birth: Unknown
Family: None living
Codename: Son of Chaos
Race: Human
Gender:Male
Outlook: Long white hair. Left eye is silver, right is orange. Height is around 6'7 or 6'8. Strong build. Covered in tattoos. A strong, intimidating face.
Class: Dark-side force user. Rank: Adept, Saber focused.

History: Very little is known of his early life. His earliest memories are of being taken under his former masters wing. His master known only as Reaper 13, the leader of a religious cult(the Sacred Flame Legion) on Korriban. Vrihn trained under Reaper 13 for 29 years. For most of that 29 years, the Sacred Flame Legion was at war with a rival cult(The Dark Angels of Korriban). Vrihn flourished in war, he grew strong and cold with a thirst for blood. At the peak of the war, Vrihn was captain amongst Reaper 13's elite guard. Eventually Reaper 13 fell in battle, leaving Vrihn with a black saber crystal((Are black sabers allowed???)), and the mental scars of a lifetime. Shortly after Reaper 13's death, the Sacred Flame Legion fell apart and disbanded. Vrihn now wanders the Galaxy seeking to restore the legion.

This bio is denied, due the low information.

If I make it a proper bio can it be accepted?

Yes.