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PostSubject: The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)    The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 28, 2010 3:15 am

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The moon's reflection makes the little fountain on the senate yard look amazing. The gravel grates as Marco walks over the path, the two guards beside him all wear fancy clothes as they still look militairy. Marco seems amused on the evening. The fleet was established and the tech was send to the empire, the end of the deal. They both had what they promised eachother to give.

Marco enters the palace in the early morning and heads directly to the protocol. "I wish to speak with the empress"
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The hologram inside the Empress' office flickers and activates. Infront of Marco she has a rather strict look, other then the normal. Need anything?
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Marco looks formal on the hologram as he has his hands behind his back. "Good morning empress, I hope I didnt interupt you. As you know, the deal is over and the datalonian fleet is established. To celebrate that, me and my staff invite you for a tour around our new flagship." He smiles for a moment and then waits for an answer
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Nodded twice. Alright then...Shall I get my own transport or will you come over and pick me up?
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"Come downstairs, transport is waiting" He turns the holo off and steps back ward. He nods to a guards who leaves. to another guard he orders to start the transporter
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Came down, looking magestic with her gothic dress like always. Se gets inside the transport, accompanied by two Imperial Elites.
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With a little transport they leave the planets surface and head for the Datalonian flagship. The ship is made up from a jedi cruiser and many engines of different ships. They enter the hangar and the doors shut. Marco opens the door and enters the immense hangar.My empress, I represent you; The Exposior!". "The datalonian forces are lined up and salute. Marco leads the way to an elevator. "First we give a visit to the bridge."


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PostSubject: Re: The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)    The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)  Icon_minitimeWed Dec 29, 2010 6:46 pm

(mind if i join in? i know i've been inactive a while,but im interested in trp. Smile )
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PostSubject: Re: The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)    The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)  Icon_minitimeWed Dec 29, 2010 7:24 pm

(I now this is a bit off topic but you still havent had that talk between the Empress and Sora minx for the alliance of the Cerians and the empire Empress if you could do that soon that would be great)
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PostSubject: Re: The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)    The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)  Icon_minitimeFri Dec 31, 2010 3:36 am

//Contact me ponya and corenth, of course you can. Thats what we are trying to get with this plot. Activity


Marco turenia guided the Empress troughout the ship, and ended up at the bridge. There were many armed gaurds at the side watching them in silence. "As you can see my empress, our fleet is ready to handle anything in their power. Datalon is a developing planet with great power. For a small planet of course" He says it in a arrogant way while twisting his gun, then he speaks to himself "But not for long". He suddenly turns around, grabs the empress and lies a gun on her head "Suprise!" He says in a happy way. "As you see aswell, all guns are aimed at the empress. Unless you want her to die, you should lay your weapons down" He says to the elite guards
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She let out a sigh. I had this one coming for...Whatever reason...Again. Aint I lucky? Speaks with a calm yet REALLY annoyed voice. By all means drop your weapons. I do not doubt these fools will fire. Although soon enough you are going to get what you deserve for this betrayel. Just tell me one thing. Why exactly are you doing it? Illogicly for fun or? What's your reason?
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The guards drop their rifle's. One of them contacts the empire through the inter comm directly towards the Imperial high Command in Coruscant. The comm is undetectable, due to it being inter comm. ''We are being held hostage it seems. They turned on us. We will observe what happens and contact you. Ready the fleet, Admiral.''
The inter comm stops by itself, so it doesnt get jammed in any way. The Empress spoke again. I wonder how much times I saved your ass. I offered my assistance to you. Commited a trade route. Now then, why exactly is this turn of events?
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PostSubject: Re: The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)    The New Nation plot- The revile from uprising darkness (!)  Icon_minitimeFri Dec 31, 2010 5:16 am

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aCZicBpLGBg&feature=youtube_gdata (Own upload)

"You will see soon enough. Untill then I got a little riddle " He continues in a dreamy way "Once the signal has been given, the way will be open. Darkness will revile itself and the once powerfull nations that are in controll will have to-" But before he can finish the officer near him says "Incoming ship, its one of our own but then from the defense forces" . Marco smiles a little bit "Let them in, and let them speak".

Not a minute later, three soldiers walk in. The middle one has a robe on and speaks out loud "How could you, betrayer of your own kind". Marco goes white and answers "From everyone I expected to see, my own nephew visits me" . Jod Turenia is furious and loudly says "I knew something was wrong, datalon "closed" for anyone. The new fleet.. but that you would betray are only allie. You really think Datalon could handle the entire empire" He says in a annoyed way. Marco then smiles and orders his men "Blast him", but jod turenia signs to the two behind them. Two guards on the left from marco fire at the other guards and jod force pushes marco againts a wall. Suddenly one of the panels overides and a small explosion takes place on the bridge. The smoke enters fills the room and jod activates his saber looking for enemy troops.
One of the commando's presses a button and the smoke leaves the room. The commando's look around for any surviving tratoirs. Jod quickly looks around and says "Where the heck is marco?!"

Marco still has his blaster on the empress head while he marches to the escape pods. As soon as the smoke filled the room he had injected the empress with a weird drug making her not on her senses at the moment.

Jod and the commando officer rush trough the hall ways trying to get to the escape pods before they leave. When they came around the corner, marco stood there with the gun at the empress' head again "No step closer". Jod waves at the commando officer to put the gun on the floor "Uncle marco, I just dont understand any of this. Since last year you have been acting like this". Marco grined "You dont know who im working with-", But then someone behind him finishes the sentence while coughing "But-it is..way bigger then you-know". A man with a small beard of average age stands there with a gun, the man is covered with wounds and is barely clothed. The man aims and fires at marco. Marco falls down o his knees and is dead before he even touched the ground with his head.
The man behind marco also falls down, still breathing thoug. Jod is still standing, unknowing from what just happend. BUt the commando officer already has his comm in his hands and messages "Send a med team up here, QUICK!" . He walks to the Empress and says "This is commmader Atil form the datalonian commando's, can you hear me miss"

Jod walks to the body of marco and checks. Hes dead. after that he runs to the other man and checks him, this man breaths but is suffering from his wounds.

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Would be better now, since the injection fades from time. She shakes her head. What's this all about, Atil? I suppose you have an explination...? Otherwise my fleet will begin tearing this place apart. I DO NOT appretiate betrayel...And I do not look forward to our agreement kindly... She gives a glare, and awaits an answer.
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He thinks and asnwers "Its difficult, but we think Marco got help from.. how you call it. Outer space? We stand for a unkown threat and further we dont know. We had spies on this ship since jod didnt trust what was going on. But who that man is, what he was talking about. No idea"

A few minutes later a Datalonian Med ship arrives. Atil says to the Empress "These ships from us left the navy secretly and joined us. We are prepared to do anything in our power to stop this madness.. but now the big leader got involved"He looks nervous while the doctors arive. "Empress, we made contact with the Imperial HQ and we are bringng you there for investegation. The drug you got might have longer effects as far as we know. Nothing serious though"

They bring her on board, and take the man aswell on a brancard. They immidetly leave for the planets surface. When jod looks out of the window the full Datalonian fleet is gone "This is insane" He is stunned from Marco's sudden betrayel and death.
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Next time make sure that there arent any suprises when I come...I expected everything to be well and great, but instead I almost get shot in the head. This mockery wont go unpunished....
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Evan would feel that somenthing is wrong with Empress and walking around room he keeps asking himself what is happening. Somenthing is wrong. I better go ask someone what's happening with Empress at negotiations. He asks guard but getting response:I don't know Sir he walks around worried.
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A small gunship flew by, making a short landing before taking off again. Corenth stepped off, wearing brand new robes and armor under it. He came up to the Empress and others. He had just finished orientation, room assignments, etc. M'lady. Corenth said with a bow. I apologize for my lateness, I was busy with another batch of fresh students back at the temple. Please continue.
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((Excuse me but Im not on Coruscant and something is gonna happen right now on my way back. The Jedi yet dont know what happened with the Empress since its strictly Imperial.))
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The Empress got on a small freighter, escorted by a small army towards Coruscant. The freighter had the remains of the Imperial troops on board and some of the Datalon millitia. Suddenly an unknown ship flew by, launching two rockets towards the engines. The crash causes them to fly towards the nearest system, in a crash landing(Make that nearest system....Alzoc). The imperial's sent a distress beacon stepping out with the Empress. She sighs.
I've really had enough of this...
Few small grenade launchers fly past, exploding on the ground nearby. The Empress is taken inside of the ship while the Imperials and Millitia stand ready outside, making a barricade around the entrance. On the other side there is heard metal steps. Soon enough a first line of Super Battle Droids appears, aiming towards the ship. The SBD's stop and a swarm of B-1 Battle Droids appears behind them. They open fire on the freighter of the Empress. The distress beacon is sent to Coruscant and the Imperials recieve word.
An imperial Jet Trooper quickly flies towards the Jedi Temple to inform the need of the Jedi to help on Alzoc. The Fleet has already began to form. The massice invasion force of the Imperial Fleet is ready, and loading troops and vechicles. Evan aswell is informed by an office guard, and is likely to need asisstance aswell. Everyone are sent to the Imperial Fleet Force, for take off.
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Evan when only hears information he feels directly what happend (Through Force Bound/Link). He stands up and goes on nearest Imperial Ship.
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Commander Atil and the Datalonian Commando's grabbed their gear "Empress, we've sent a distress beacon out aswell. We hope that the Datalonian Forces will be here soon aswell. Datalon is not as far as Corescant. And we've sent the body of marco together with that other man towards it. If you dont mind of course we want to take care of that ourselfs." He waits a couple of seconds "Our orders at the start off this special unit were given by marco 'Protect our allies' was one of them . Empress, we are willing to do everything to kee[ you and your soldiers in safety untill reinforcements arrive"
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Evan is waiting till ship will start sending smaller ships/gunships/dropships so He can land right into. Evan feels only small headcache but he uses time to meditate.
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The Imperial invasion fleet lifts off heading towards the Distress Beacon. Time is needed to locate and arrive though.
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Aswell the Datalonian forces arrive. They form around the Imperial fleet for protection, not that its neccesary. But thats part of the Army's structure
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