The Edition of the Timeline we went in our changes and what happened on the line we made of our own.((Cannon changes be sure to read this))

Okay here we go, what we made and most impotantly what is so interesting to post this in here and what's the reason for the post? Really simple this is the edited version of the cannon story that we did to improve better continue of the movies and the star wars story itself, we are not moving to Lagecy or somekind of bullshit like that.

The most important thing is that we made few cults as the Morg'tather that did some major damage on the council on Taris what they did was to steal the jedis the most talented one.....The cult was latly destroyed disbanded or call it whatever the leader isn't yet dead, he's hiding somewhere.....A group of Jedi Padawans promissing one or not managed to fall to the darkside and join the cult, there they learned new powers in the force new way to fight new takelents unlocked by the jedi hiden in deep secret.Owen Nafeel once a great jedi padawan that saved the life of a master during the first ((Un cannon)) invasion on Utapau, he saved the Jedi Master on a ship with 4 more Jedi Masters and not the padawan disobeyed order and attacked the cruiser with his squad entering inside he managed to locate and get into the place where they hide the Jedi master.......For his bad luck there was someone that was waiting for him, Ventress yet still not as powerful in the darkside as on the cannon she managed to defeat him really easy.Owen cuted the cuffs of the master and trowed his lightsaber at the window braking it, they went to the space where they was saved by Jedi Padawan Jainie Nafeel, she saved them and they went to the main cruiser the operation was under the control of Jedi Knight Bra Dogee.The young Jedi got their detentions......Owen Nafeel went to the temple after being pissed of he somehow got changed he started feeling thing s that the didn't have to feel, he grew up feeling power and anger every time someone close to him was in danger.....In the time he was on detention he found out that Jainie is his sister, and then the things started to get worse he me a man told him a bout his parents they where both Dark Jedi, Owen swore to destroy them but he didn't Knew that this is going to be his future.......After sharing his feelings around him Owen started to change even more and more till the day he took a person with himself and left the Temple, he found our a bout the Cult and two more people.Brother and sister, they where both Dark Jedi very expirinced one.Owen started his training into the dark side living with the person he took with himself in a ship, Owen met the cult leader in a Cantina he could feel the power and the anger, latly he joined the Cult there he learned even more for the greater good he said, or the greather evil that he brought to most of those that where close to him.After few more months Eugen Darkrider a Padawan and once dear frend to Owen found him in a seawer while Owen was practiicing his Force crush and grip skills.They went into fight Eugen Knew that it is stupid and quite infair, as Owen was one of the most promising saberists in the Temple, but he did it with the cost of his arm.Owen coulden't do it, he spared his life and left Eugen to go away.Latter they became friends again, Jainie his sister left the temple as well after falling in-love into Vara a dianthim from Orderon and a future Queen he somehow keft his sister to live with Vara and the Brother/sister he met on his way out of the Temple.They took care of them Jainie and Vara went to Orderon and Vara took her place as a Queen of Orderon, Jainie as her gilfriend, Owen continued his path......((I wont review the other parts of my characters story as they are privite))

We have to post the things that happend to the chars, here?

Send it over to one of the admins or the moderators so they can edit the post and add it.

Hidden from the Senate the devious queen-Empress of the planet she bought through murder of the Minister, using the Death Watch, Liandra Tyria - Once the proud daughter of the Alderaan ambassoder, now a conquerer- used the population as slaves to build her own Fortress, under pressure of the Death Watch. While the Jedi had no idea about this millitray uprising, the Empress also bought CIS technology from General Grievous. While her hatred for the Republic became bigger, and with the betrayel of her Jedia dn clone slaves on her own planet, her own millitary force grew in numbers. Now she seeks to destroy the Chancellor, to ensure future attacks on her planet will not cause harm...Or to make future plans about her uprising? Time will tell.